The black dot

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In this short movie, we see a man bored, i'm quite surprised to see how greed took over but if you think about it, there is always one part of everyone that would allow greed to take over when you have power. The Equilibrium in this short, is a normal boring day at the office. Then the interruption is the black hole he printed off and it turns into greed

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